M/M, Science Fiction - novella
TBR Reviewer: Brutally Honest
TBR Reviewer: Brutally Honest
Review
This had an interesting concept. This line had me laughing - the mighty lump of manhood at my groin bulging heroically. I know what you’re thinking, lame line but when you read it in the context of the story, funny stuff.
Ready for the issues? First, is his age. How old is he? By him getting beat up by that bully it sounded like he was a kid but once he’s lex there’s description that’s adult. In other words if this is a kid, those descriptions were awkward to read. I had to go back and check the blurb.
Turns out this is a m/m science fiction novel. So, the author definitely could have explained that better. There’s no age on Lex or background. There were excessive commas. They needed to be eliminated. Lex and Lotar also have a relationship already so there was no connection between them. None what so ever, so it's pretty much like reading the ending to a 400 page book. Then there’s an ammonia leak and they’re stopping to have sex...Come on!
Then we come to the ending which is a moment I like to call, what the hell! That was no an ending. It just ended. No resolution, no explanations and I hate wasting time when authors do this. I invested in the story and they left me hanging. It’s becoming such a common occurrence with these new authors. A story should have a beginning, middle/climax and AN
ENDING!
Infinity Incident was a waste of time. Normally, because it sounded promising I’d give it two stars. This is not a book, it’s a bad short story and as such will be rated accordingly.
Ready for the issues? First, is his age. How old is he? By him getting beat up by that bully it sounded like he was a kid but once he’s lex there’s description that’s adult. In other words if this is a kid, those descriptions were awkward to read. I had to go back and check the blurb.
Turns out this is a m/m science fiction novel. So, the author definitely could have explained that better. There’s no age on Lex or background. There were excessive commas. They needed to be eliminated. Lex and Lotar also have a relationship already so there was no connection between them. None what so ever, so it's pretty much like reading the ending to a 400 page book. Then there’s an ammonia leak and they’re stopping to have sex...Come on!
Then we come to the ending which is a moment I like to call, what the hell! That was no an ending. It just ended. No resolution, no explanations and I hate wasting time when authors do this. I invested in the story and they left me hanging. It’s becoming such a common occurrence with these new authors. A story should have a beginning, middle/climax and AN
ENDING!
Infinity Incident was a waste of time. Normally, because it sounded promising I’d give it two stars. This is not a book, it’s a bad short story and as such will be rated accordingly.
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