Novel
TBR reviewer: Brutally Honest
TBR reviewer: Brutally Honest
There was some head hopping. The main issues was her mentioning various things/people
and me begin lost. I don’t know if it’s because I didn’t read the first one or that she just didn’t explain them. There’s also scenes that aren’t flesh out, more outline like and a serious lack of details as well as choppy scenes. Then there are mind readers, witches, shifters, demon shadows (Which is what?) and elf’s along with a lot of character introductions all at once. Such as one moment our main character is a witch and the next a half breed. Is she half witch and half something else? This wasn’t touched on. Even if I read the first it should have still been mentioned for the second in this series. The first chapter is a massive confusion. There’s some basic editing issues, repetition and the sort. There’s no chemistry between the characters. Don’t get me wrong I did like them, but the fact that it’s supposed to be a romantic relationship didn’t feel realistic.
All this is adding up to a difficult read. I enjoyed the plot but ultimately, disliked the book.
and me begin lost. I don’t know if it’s because I didn’t read the first one or that she just didn’t explain them. There’s also scenes that aren’t flesh out, more outline like and a serious lack of details as well as choppy scenes. Then there are mind readers, witches, shifters, demon shadows (Which is what?) and elf’s along with a lot of character introductions all at once. Such as one moment our main character is a witch and the next a half breed. Is she half witch and half something else? This wasn’t touched on. Even if I read the first it should have still been mentioned for the second in this series. The first chapter is a massive confusion. There’s some basic editing issues, repetition and the sort. There’s no chemistry between the characters. Don’t get me wrong I did like them, but the fact that it’s supposed to be a romantic relationship didn’t feel realistic.
All this is adding up to a difficult read. I enjoyed the plot but ultimately, disliked the book.
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