Adventure, Science Fiction - novel
TBR Reviewer: B.H.
TBR Reviewer: B.H.
Review
First suggestion to this author, stay away from exclamation points. Seriously. This would have benefited from more editing. The scenes jumps are freaking horrendous. We start in a sparring match between Stormy and Lance. Good sequence but then suddenly after a confession he loves Stormy, she’s resting at home. Rowen's relaxing then she’s reciting this poem/rhyme or something in her head and then she’s thinking about the cake for her birthday. What? What's going on? There's no flow to speak of. Then there’s information dumps which are numerous. Can I just sigh and try another book?
I read on, as I have to review this for TBR. Okay, so to decipher, there’s apparently mental messaging. Cool concept, sort of like telepathy. The flashbacks are not italicized or any indication it’s a memory so I had no idea it was a flashback for a few paragraphs. Then we’re back to present in such a jerky fashion. There was no description on the ship, or her fly through space or landing in this asteroid. It was frustrating. This is supposed to be science fiction but she skipped over what could have been world building descriptions.
I really tried to get into this book as I absolutely love science fiction but alas, not going to happen.
I read on, as I have to review this for TBR. Okay, so to decipher, there’s apparently mental messaging. Cool concept, sort of like telepathy. The flashbacks are not italicized or any indication it’s a memory so I had no idea it was a flashback for a few paragraphs. Then we’re back to present in such a jerky fashion. There was no description on the ship, or her fly through space or landing in this asteroid. It was frustrating. This is supposed to be science fiction but she skipped over what could have been world building descriptions.
I really tried to get into this book as I absolutely love science fiction but alas, not going to happen.
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