Erotica, Sci Fi - Novella
TBR reviewer: B.H.
TBR reviewer: B.H.
Review
Cum To Me sounded like such a unique and sexy idea. A woman (Clone) that hurtles through space every time she has an orgasm. Fantastic and brilliant twist. This one time she meets three drool worthy clones that bare the same tattoo as her. Apparently, they’re supposed to be together. Only they can give her children. As I said wonderful idea. The main issue was details and the rushing. Ms. Masters gave no surrounding details and several scenes felt so
rushed I almost wondered if I was reading a plot outline.
The dialogue between the characters were stiff, it felt very unreal the way they talked ‘casually’ with each other. There is so much potential within Ms. Master’s grasp but she absolutely needs to flesh out her stories.
Pelly is a good character, innocence blended with curiosity of the sexual kind. The 3 hot clones were entertaining. I found the orgasm traveling to be really worth reading this. Did I mention hot?! That said, I’d recommend Cum to Me. It was a fast treat with giggles and squirms.
I’ve read several of Ms. Masters books. She could be a top-notch author with those fabulous plots if she only worked on fleshing the manuscript out. I really hope she grows and reaches that Plato.
rushed I almost wondered if I was reading a plot outline.
The dialogue between the characters were stiff, it felt very unreal the way they talked ‘casually’ with each other. There is so much potential within Ms. Master’s grasp but she absolutely needs to flesh out her stories.
Pelly is a good character, innocence blended with curiosity of the sexual kind. The 3 hot clones were entertaining. I found the orgasm traveling to be really worth reading this. Did I mention hot?! That said, I’d recommend Cum to Me. It was a fast treat with giggles and squirms.
I’ve read several of Ms. Masters books. She could be a top-notch author with those fabulous plots if she only worked on fleshing the manuscript out. I really hope she grows and reaches that Plato.
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