Genre: erotica, Christmas
TBR Reviewer: Brutally Honest
Rating: 2 Stars – Had potential but we didn’t like it.
I have a big issue with this new trend, women inviting strange men in their car/house just because their hot. Life is not a fairytale and that hot guy is probably some psycho looking to cut you into little pieces. Call me cautious. Anyway Noelle, our lead female, invites Santa a strange hot man into her car because his vehicle broke down. Not the best way to start a story as Noelle now sounds like an idiot. However, she is a cop so she should have more training than the normal woman should. Therefore, I’m not judging her character yet. That is until they start making out on the side of the road. Sigh. Let’s say for fiction’s sake, there’s no such things as std’s or crazy killers and the author wanted to keep this light hearted. Santa is still a STRANGER! There’s no connection between the characters so the sex is very aloof. Then she’s torn about her ex cheating on her but takes Santa’s word he’s single. Come on!
If Noelle was a good girl and had been spurned, why would she possible trust this stranger’s word? The plot was thin but the characters were nearly translucent. There was no depth. The
peppermint-tasting penis was an interesting idea. I think this story was rushed and needed a more solid plot to be successful.