TBR Reviewer: Brutally Honest
This needed a massive edit, some sentences made no sense and I didn’t have a clue as to what the author was trying to convey. Then there’s name dropping with no explanation as to who those people are. Tom and Zee are mentioned without any explanations or backgrounds. The scenes are bare, meaning no surrounding details and very choppy. There’s also a very rush feeling to every scene or maybe that’s because they’re no details, either way it’s not good for the story. The plot was completely lost to the rushing, lack of details and cardboard characters. I hate to say it but this fell flat. The story needs to be looked over by an editor and re-worked.
The plot is interesting and I think this is a great idea on the authors part. I would not recommend Safeword Matte.
SIDE NOTE: THE BUY LINK WAS NOT ADDED AS COMPUTER SECURITY POPPED UP WITH A TROJAN HORSE.