TBR Reviewer: Brutally Honest
My goodness, an editor, please. He says, she says, he says, she says...Ugh. That’s just the first issue. Why is this woman asking a total stranger to lick her and then she’s surprised when he tries to force himself on her. She keeps talking about different women with no explanation on
who they are and then she manages to freeze this guy. What is going on? This needs a serious rework to be comprehensible! Chapter two is just a brief peek into something, we don’t know where, who these people are or why I should even care about them. There is no character development and it’s very hard to follow the story. Several times, I had read a passage over to try to sort everything out. It was a lot of effort with no satisfaction.
I can’t even give this two stars, which is ‘the story has potential’. This story had no solid plot, no details, and no order. Perhaps I’ll try this author again in the future because there was the smallest of lights behind a few of the scenes but nothing that burst through the cloud of
issues in The Huntress.