Print - Novel
TBR reviewer: B.H (Brutally Honest)
I’ve read a few m/m romances and thoroughly enjoyed them which is why I jumped at the chance to read this. There are a few words missing and grammatical mistakes but nothing that jolts the reader out of the story. There’s also three sex scenes in the span of fifty or so pages. Don’t get me wrong, I love reading erotica, usually the steamy the better but with so much sex it starts taking away from the story. The flow is hindered by all the naked bodies. There’s no progression. There’s a couple pages of story then a sex scene. Another two pages of story then, you guessed it, sex scene. It overwhelms the plot and after the sixth or seventh time I simply skipped those pages.
This was an interesting idea but it was overwhelmed with sex. That’s why I’m rating it 2 for it honestly had potential.