The story has a different and interesting plot, which I really enjoyed. Although the planet is advanced, the way it is described seems somewhat backwards than advanced but it makes the story that much better. Athena, now she is great. She is full of spunk and would not be broken by Barik. Barik is another spicy aspect of story. I must say I find his way of training Athena jaw dropping at times. I am definitely surprised with some of her training and how things turn out. This book could be great as a series. All in all a great short story!