The mistake between Dennis and Craig about Kelly feels very natural. At first. I think it goes on way too long. The sexual tension is wonderfully hot but I wish the story had more substance. Kelly complains to her friends, swims, shops, it’s very slow moving. Craig flirts with Kelly then Dennis comes in and he goes cold because he thinks she’s his best friend’s girlfriend. Craig is a fabulous, upstanding guy right there. I think if this were a novella it’d be great but at 329 pages it’s too long with not much happening. The romance is sweet, boarding on sexy. Things do pick up at the end. There’s a lot of potential here and I’m excited to see what else the author comes up with next.
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