Genre: Shifter, Romance
TBR Reviewer: Bella Star
Rating: 3 Stars - A Good Read
Alphy is a true alpha bear shifter so he can’t stay too long in another bears territory. After he loses his military team and his parents to a car accident he takes his two younger siblings to Canada. Staying with their aunt opens up new possibilities, new dangers and his mate.
This had such potential! The plot was so close to great. Then there were parts that were slow and others that we rushed. The balance was definitely off . And certain phrases just felt over the top. For example, Alphy queried to himself, why say that all. Just end it at the dialogue and continue the story. Maybe another pass by an editor would have helped. Then there’s the whole thing with how they met. Gale is being hunted by a pack that’s after her gay brother but a sexy guy comes along and she has no reservations. And then kisses the complete stranger! Come on! Grrr. The story really drew me in and I could see the hint of a great, five star story, hidden between the issues. I’m going to keep an eye out for this author because I think with time and practice they could be a really talented story teller.