TBR reviewer: B.H.
rushed I almost wondered if I was reading a plot outline.
The dialogue between the characters were stiff, it felt very unreal the way they talked ‘casually’ with each other. There is so much potential within Ms. Master’s grasp but she absolutely needs to flesh out her stories.
Pelly is a good character, innocence blended with curiosity of the sexual kind. The 3 hot clones were entertaining. I found the orgasm traveling to be really worth reading this. Did I mention hot?! That said, I’d recommend Cum to Me. It was a fast treat with giggles and squirms.
I’ve read several of Ms. Masters books. She could be a top-notch author with those fabulous plots if she only worked on fleshing the manuscript out. I really hope she grows and reaches that Plato.